Explain what you revised/changed and why you did it. Be sure to respond to at least one other student's post.
I revised my paragraph about Muhammad by making it easier to read and I did this because it was all clumped together and hard to read. I couldnt figure out how to do any cool stuff with it though, Im not really a tech. person so…..ya
Aaron- people make mistakes on the computer sometimes. plus, in most cases, grammar doesn't apply for social conversations, just for future reference.
Emerald- the like again would be awesome!
Danielle-Who said the Muhammad section wasn't fancy? it looks so much better that it did before! Good job!
The reason why I revised my paragraph, it was kind of hard to read, clump together, and so on… So, I edited and made it easier for people to read. So yeah thats the best I did ( I'm not that smart with tech stuff lol =p).
I organized the paragraph, The Caste System because the actual system was mixed in with the paragraph. So I used bold print and bullet points to point the system out.
I went over the whole thing and changed some minor details. I put hyphens and colons where they needed to be just to make it look a little neater I guess. Nothing that really mattered… sigh I also added this ginormous picture of buddha. I didn't know it was going to be that big! It just shows the details better I guess. I thought it needed a little pazazz, then I added too much. sorry
I added some pictures. I added one of Alexander the Great. One of Octavian caesar and changed the picture of Muhammad because it made the page weird.
I re-sized a lot of the pictures that were put on the site because they were so big and took up more then half of a page. I also put horizontal lines under the headings people, places, and ideas to make them more separate.
Hmm… I was unaware that we were supposed to revise it… Curses! :( Well, that's an epic fail by the Boergerman. Down, down I go, into the stygian gloom and xeric blackness of the NG itself. Alas! I'm gonna go punish myself. Farewell, o those that are smarter and better than myself.
Its not due till the 15th ya know….
hahahahahahaha!!!! I can't breathe!!! Chris, homeskillet, it's cool! You're not the only one who forgot. So, you wont be alone in the stygian gloom and xeric blackness… whatever that is
I changed the headings on most of the important people and also, I made my paragraph bulleted and I added a picture so that it would be easier to read and eye-catching!
When people altered their headings all of the topics ended up looking different, so to remove confusion I went through and made as many as I could look universal. I also added an image of Siddartha in his process of enlightenment to go along with the first post, adding some color and art to our page.
You made it look great! I really like the picture you found of Siddartha, it's very eye-catching!
im glad you did that ma'am haha =)
I made all foregin names bold, as well as the most important name in the entire doccument, though just in my own work. I also plan to create a short video detailing Ashoka's life.
I grouped all essays on Jesus together.
good job, I was trying to bold mine, but i couldnt figure it out hahaha, im really not good at this whole wikidot thing
I added a picture of Confucius so you would have an idea of what he looked like. Also, I moved the Buddha paragragh closer to Buddhism, so you could see these two thing together.
I changed my short paragraph about Carthage, THE MOST AWESOME CITY EVER!. I made it more awesome than it already was before. I made it easier to read by adding bold and using bullet points. So I made an already awesome short paragraph more awesome. (I'LL BE BLACK)
I don't know much about Carthage, only that thich involves it's location, empire, and the Punic Wars, but i agree with you. And Hannibal's awesome. He and Augustus are my faveorite people west of Greece.
Casting call for voice actors to recite lines in my video on Ashoka. All that you need to do get me your voice somehow.
I volunteer my voice to be in your video chris, but only if you think its acceptable for it
I saw that someone used many grammar errors in their entry, and since I hate mistakes that can be so easily avoided, I went through and corrected them.
Cool, I hate grammatical errors also!
I rearranged all of the information into Catagories.