What did you revise and why?
Post an explanation of what you revised on the Post-Classical page and why you did it. Be sure to respond to at least one other student's post.
What did you revise and why?
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Art and Literature; because I posted it, and it was still wrong.
(account deleted)I added a couple more infomation about Justinian and his empire..
i should have added some more information to my section
I put bullet points infront of some of the information that just had stuff in a big paragraph because it was hard to read and hard to get information quickly.
i changed the headings in the idea place because they all were just bolded and it didnt fit with the rest
I changed my paragraph about the Heian Period in Japan into an outline………..
that makes it a lot easier to read
Yes it does. The long paragraphs were boring.
that makes it easier to read…..
i like it that way better because it is simple to pick out the info you would need
I made my the paragraph about the Sunni-Shi'a split easier to read by making it bullet points, and I added a little more information.
Thats what i did too
me too. it it's easier to read and understand it.
I created a link to a page of what Quezalcoatl might have looked like as a man with a beard. I changed some person's long and BORING paragraph about Temujin and made it much more easy to read. Before it was really long and had no spaces. It didn't even have a heading. I added a heading and spaces to make it MUCH more easier to read.(i'll be black)
Thats good. The Temujin paragraph was very long.
I shall have my VENGEANCE!
Chris doesnt seem to happy with you revising his paragraph, you might want to watch out
I resent the insult, not the revision.
I bolded the headings and arranged some of the information.
Bolding the headings really helps the reader.
Yeah it made it easier to understand what they were reading…
I put my Xuanzong paragraph into bullet points and added a picture.
Yeah that made things easier to read, plus the picture is fun to look at!
I bolded some key words and added bullet points. Nothing too special but it made things easier to understand.
This was definitely helpful and made the page easier to read!
I added pictures. It helps to make the page more visually enticing. Yes, I did just type enticing. Oh, did it again.
Watch it James, doing the bare minimum will get you a low grade.
I should try pictures on the next one!
The Temujin part read like a fantasy novel…
I thank you. Someone with the last name of Wilson said that it was boring. I am not without my supporters.
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