Post an explanation of what you revised on the Post-Classical page and why you did it. Be sure to respond to at least one other student's post.
I added a couple more infomation about Justinian and his empire..
I changed my paragraph about the Heian Period in Japan into an outline………..
that makes it a lot easier to read
I made my the paragraph about the Sunni-Shi'a split easier to read by making it bullet points, and I added a little more information.
I created a link to a page of what Quezalcoatl might have looked like as a man with a beard. I changed some person's long and BORING paragraph about Temujin and made it much more easy to read. Before it was really long and had no spaces. It didn't even have a heading. I added a heading and spaces to make it MUCH more easier to read.(i'll be black)
Thats good. The Temujin paragraph was very long.
Chris doesnt seem to happy with you revising his paragraph, you might want to watch out
I bolded the headings and arranged some of the information.
Bolding the headings really helps the reader.
I put my Xuanzong paragraph into bullet points and added a picture.
I bolded some key words and added bullet points. Nothing too special but it made things easier to understand.
I added pictures. It helps to make the page more visually enticing. Yes, I did just type enticing. Oh, did it again.
The Temujin part read like a fantasy novel…