What did you change to the Early Modern Period?
I added a picture of the Janissaries to show people what they possibly looked like.
i added a picture of El Mina
I edited this big, long, boring paragraph about Napoleon(who wrote that?) and added bullet points and spaces and changed some of the boring parts. Really, who would take the time to make that big old paragraph about Napoleon? Whoever did it has no life.
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That's weird. But nice revision!
You know perfectly well it was me, and I have already mentioned several times my distain for it. I wrote it at like 3:30 am, so I wasn't really thinking…
And not everyone hates me.
Its true, i don't hate you
cool, I can read about a sub-par sitcom.
I edited the Portuguese slave trade in Africa thingamajig. I bolded stuff, bulleted stuff, added a nifty picture and edited the information a tad.
I just changed my bullet points about the Asian Sea Trading Network and bolded terms
I also organized everything into people, terms, and other things.
Job well done. That always makes things easier.
I changed the scientific Revolution paragraph into bullet points. I thought it was easier to read with bullet points so that's why I changed it.
HEY! That was my paragraph and I made it hard to read so i could purposefully put it in bullet points later on. I had to find other stuf to fix and actually try.
I did several irrelevant things to make it better…because i'm smart…
I bolded some things in Scientific Revolution and capitalized the n in Isaac Newton
We bolded key terms in our Awful Essay.
I deleted some of the extra spaces between paragraphs and attempted to make it look more continuous throughout the page. I also fixed a few minor spelling or grammar errors.